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Re: request to progress draft-ietf-kink-kink-10



Hi derek,

> The two editorial issues are listed below.

Should I resubmit the new draft -11 after fixing two issues ?

> ISSUES
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> 
> 3.5.  Reporting Errors
> 
>    If the initiator detects an error in a received replay, there is no
> 
> should be
> 
>    If the initiator detects an error in a received reply, there is no
> 
> (replay -> reply)
> 
> -----------
> 
> 5.3.  Identification Payloads
> 
> Where is the source of these IDs?

The source is [IPDOI].  So it should change into the following text.

	KINK restricts the ID types that are defined by section
	4.6.2.1 of [IPDOI], to the following values: