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Re: request to progress draft-ietf-kink-kink-10
Hi derek,
> The two editorial issues are listed below.
Should I resubmit the new draft -11 after fixing two issues ?
> ISSUES
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> 3.5. Reporting Errors
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> If the initiator detects an error in a received replay, there is no
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> should be
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> If the initiator detects an error in a received reply, there is no
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> (replay -> reply)
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> 5.3. Identification Payloads
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> Where is the source of these IDs?
The source is [IPDOI]. So it should change into the following text.
KINK restricts the ID types that are defined by section
4.6.2.1 of [IPDOI], to the following values: